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To Sleep, Perchance to Dream by COMMANDER-C, literature

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To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

Ah, the sunrise is by the ease of night But to find thyself seen in vanity One stresses to find oneself in such plight Just to get noticed by an entity Doth you fall forth into an endless void? Doth you get to hide behind a fair world? Tell me, is that beyond your avoid? Will you be last, or first to be unfurled? Fuss, you might, it eases not in thy mind Have your mind, it can be in use for you For you have seen what can be done behind And you will always see what can be new Get off your dream, back into life today Never forget, sleep; to find a new way.

Sentiment by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Sentiment

A piece of the past Still lodged in memory As deep as the lion's flake A memory to keep; But taken too fast A thought forever Held in the prison mind As dark as a dungeon cell A memory to have; But gone forever A fear of a cost Taken to light of grief Cast away the feeling hope A memory destroyed; A memory lost Sentiment is there And taken for granted Thrown away by greed and lust A memory wasted; A memory's glare

Burden of Proof by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Burden of Proof

Confessing; getting one's burden off his chest Yet not knowing the chance, the odds of the outcome Tide pools become permanent waves of either of the two; The burden of ridicule, or the hope of the best. Informing is not enough, explaining is too much Just the right words are a slender thread What you might say, or how you say it Affects many possibilities as such Beginnings must be clear, Endings must be near, The middle left alone Yet, to know still the right words It is not easy to find them Nor will it always prompt You will always find your chords In the end, you will be heard Your thoughts might change many Your life might be at eas

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Run

You are walking in a field Not knowing your location, not knowing where you are. You feel an undying urge to run. Run from what? You see no threat. You hear no threat. Yet, the voice in your head screams "Run!" You start to feel uneasy, The unseen threat coming closer, becoming louder All you can do is feel the urge to run. The sun goes down, the urge gets stronger Coming closer Right now your legs force you to run No more can you stand still You run west, you do not stop You do not look back, you only run. Obstacles try to stop you Trip you over Nevertheless, you continue to run. You start to feel safe So you stop to catch your breath

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To Sleep, Perchance to Dream by COMMANDER-C, literature

Literature

To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

Ah, the sunrise is by the ease of night But to find thyself seen in vanity One stresses to find oneself in such plight Just to get noticed by an entity Doth you fall forth into an endless void? Doth you get to hide behind a fair world? Tell me, is that beyond your avoid? Will you be last, or first to be unfurled? Fuss, you might, it eases not in thy mind Have your mind, it can be in use for you For you have seen what can be done behind And you will always see what can be new Get off your dream, back into life today Never forget, sleep; to find a new way.

Sentiment by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Sentiment

A piece of the past Still lodged in memory As deep as the lion's flake A memory to keep; But taken too fast A thought forever Held in the prison mind As dark as a dungeon cell A memory to have; But gone forever A fear of a cost Taken to light of grief Cast away the feeling hope A memory destroyed; A memory lost Sentiment is there And taken for granted Thrown away by greed and lust A memory wasted; A memory's glare

Burden of Proof by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Burden of Proof

Confessing; getting one's burden off his chest Yet not knowing the chance, the odds of the outcome Tide pools become permanent waves of either of the two; The burden of ridicule, or the hope of the best. Informing is not enough, explaining is too much Just the right words are a slender thread What you might say, or how you say it Affects many possibilities as such Beginnings must be clear, Endings must be near, The middle left alone Yet, to know still the right words It is not easy to find them Nor will it always prompt You will always find your chords In the end, you will be heard Your thoughts might change many Your life might be at eas

Run by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Run

You are walking in a field Not knowing your location, not knowing where you are. You feel an undying urge to run. Run from what? You see no threat. You hear no threat. Yet, the voice in your head screams "Run!" You start to feel uneasy, The unseen threat coming closer, becoming louder All you can do is feel the urge to run. The sun goes down, the urge gets stronger Coming closer Right now your legs force you to run No more can you stand still You run west, you do not stop You do not look back, you only run. Obstacles try to stop you Trip you over Nevertheless, you continue to run. You start to feel safe So you stop to catch your breath

Victory Bell by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Victory Bell

Sitting in a trench five fathoms deep A soldier lay wounded in a muddy hole At home, his wife and child weep When they hear the news from the General He closes his eyes, and sees his past He sees his wife and child cry He is home with them at last One last time, he kisses them goodbye Now he sees a boy, running in a farm He knows this boy, this boy is him He walks with his father arm to arm Tackle box and rods they bear as they walk He sees a boy and his little sister play Out in the fields in lands of many acres He takes her hand tightly and leads the way Across the prairie grass, gentle warm breeze Now beneath a tree stands two lovers H

A Feeling by COMMANDER-C, literature

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A Feeling

What is it called When feelings twist and turn When you don't know right from wrong And your heart burns? Why does it hurt When you hold it in When you feel like you are drowning And limbs, needle and pin? When will it stop Will Hurt become null? Will my chest explode? And the mind, sharp to dull Will the feelings cease? Or will the build increase? And in a flash of fury Will it suddenly decrease? These feelings flow In a river of pure The tides will never rise But the fish will see a lure These feelings grow To a plant of vanity The sun will never rise But the moth will reach inhumanity A feeling burns A feeling flows A feeling grows

Faithless Flame by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Faithless Flame

As a fire does burn Deep into the night Away the flames fly In a fearless flight The flames burn strong Of light and heat Glowing with life Yet dead in defeat Feeding on a log Taunt and tame A lifeless soul A faithless flame I look into the flame I see what appears to be The past of a dream The meaning of me I look at the coals A glowing sensation looking at my past Of tainted temptation The flames are dying As the night grows old I see the flames suffering As I feel around me the cold I close my eyes once more Feeling again of shame What has died away in front of me Is the faithless flame I face the cold once more No warmth, no light

Candle Love by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Candle Love

At the beginning of dusk, as the light of day fade A candle I light; a candle I made Yet darkness come, it lights my way To find myself in the dark of the night. At the beginning of nightfall, as the dark of night dwell A candle is bright; a candle is well Yet darkness here, it shows my yell To light my way in the maw of the fight. At the beginning of sleep, as my eyelids come near A candle I snuff; a candle so clear Yet weary now, I'm still in fear To say goodnight to my shine of the bright. — At the beginning of the storm, as the lightning strike A candle is broken; a candle from height Cloven in two, yet still in might

Indian Trail by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Indian Trail

In a land of woods lakes and rocks, they say Down old Indian Trail Two lovers met eyes, fell in love the same day. They loved eachother, more than one way Down old Indian Trail He was a huntsman, preying fowl and flock Down old Indian Trail He kept her fed well, kept her in good stock Asked in return nothing more than a sock Down old Indian Trail She was a dancer, she danced in the wood Down old Indian Trail She danced day and night, all she could She sees every living creature in good Down old Indian Trail In the moon light, they dance In the moon light, they kiss Beneath the stars, above the ocean Beneath their hopes, above their dreams

Mirror by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Mirror

A life who lives in the reflection A soul lost in connection I look in the mirror And I do not like the recollection. I see the reflection of my heart I see my heartbeat, all apart But I can't seem to see, How I have hurt you from the start. In my thoughts when I sleep I dig so far, I dig so deep When my mind aches and tires, I carry on the night, in a weep. I wear my mask every day I try to make things my way But in the end it does no good, Still I remain, in the mask, I say. The mask itself, it has worn The mask itself, it has torn I can't throw it away, not today, For I will hurt you, so so forlorn. A lif

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Run by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Run

You are walking in a field Not knowing your location, not knowing where you are. You feel an undying urge to run. Run from what? You see no threat. You hear no threat. Yet, the voice in your head screams "Run!" You start to feel uneasy, The unseen threat coming closer, becoming louder All you can do is feel the urge to run. The sun goes down, the urge gets stronger Coming closer Right now your legs force you to run No more can you stand still You run west, you do not stop You do not look back, you only run. Obstacles try to stop you Trip you over Nevertheless, you continue to run. You start to feel safe So you stop to catch your breath

Victory Bell by COMMANDER-C, literature

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Victory Bell

Sitting in a trench five fathoms deep A soldier lay wounded in a muddy hole At home, his wife and child weep When they hear the news from the General He closes his eyes, and sees his past He sees his wife and child cry He is home with them at last One last time, he kisses them goodbye Now he sees a boy, running in a farm He knows this boy, this boy is him He walks with his father arm to arm Tackle box and rods they bear as they walk He sees a boy and his little sister play Out in the fields in lands of many acres He takes her hand tightly and leads the way Across the prairie grass, gentle warm breeze Now beneath a tree stands two lovers H

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To Sleep, Perchance to Dream by COMMANDER-C, literature

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To Sleep, Perchance to Dream

Ah, the sunrise is by the ease of night But to find thyself seen in vanity One stresses to find oneself in such plight Just to get noticed by an entity Doth you fall forth into an endless void? Doth you get to hide behind a fair world? Tell me, is that beyond your avoid? Will you be last, or first to be unfurled? Fuss, you might, it eases not in thy mind Have your mind, it can be in use for you For you have seen what can be done behind And you will always see what can be new Get off your dream, back into life today Never forget, sleep; to find a new way.

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